Shintoku's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Static Pulse]

Good Job!

I really liked it, and you're right, it is one of the better FBF movies. I was expecting much less.

[RTS: Bloodhoof Burger]

Not Bad

You need to sync the voice with the mouth(or speaker) better. Make sure to watch the flash in a movie format, not just on the creator itself.

Pyrowman responds:

Yeh, well that's the weird part, I'm not using any script, I just drop the sounds on a layer, but it's still not synced...meh...

[Muh fulffy beast]

Good pic

That was a great picture of a dog breathing. Try to make the dogs head move with the breathing, mostly because you can see white where the body is stretching by his neck. Also, come up with a story. Most files that get through the judgement stage have a story that is... well, normally pretty good, even though the animation isn't good. Make that dog throw up a hand, or... have a guy walk in and say, "Hey, Fido! I'm home from work! Who's ready to get neutered?" or something and you'll definately get a higher score.

[Dont Feel Bad]

Pretty Good

The lips themselves, even though they don't realy exist, need to come together on certain sylables, "B" in "Bad", "Better", and "Being", The top lip needs to touch the bottom teeth on the "F" in "Feel" and "Face", and in the phrase "...it's better than being..." needs to have more specific mouth shapes. Overall, not bad.

Lord-Of-The-Crayons responds:

Yeah I was a little stuck getting mouth shapes right for the start of words, thanks for the responce I know what I need to pratice now. ^.^

[Reflection on Family]

Funny shit

I loved the twist at the end. Fucking hilarious!!

[Story of Angry German Kid]

Sucked

It would be better if you could come up with an idea instead of doing relatively nothing.

Maddrap responds:

is about the Angry German Kid it was on googlevideo and I watch it but did you watch on the sounds
on the movie did you or not well look again or just go on www.googlevideo.com
and you'll find the angry german kid

[Tim Burton on Newgrounds]

Reading

What I could read of it was pretty funny, but some of the lines were too long to read in the one second I had to read them.

P.S. I'm glad you're out of the emo phase.

[DevilSlayer V-1]

Nice Video!

Can't wait for more! Good story, just hope there are a lot more demons to slay.

JazLyte responds:

Thanks, and yup, there'll be more

[spanish translations]

It's ok.

You need to find a way to keep the audiences attention.