Shintoku's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[RTS: Bloodhoof Burger]

Not Bad

You need to sync the voice with the mouth(or speaker) better. Make sure to watch the flash in a movie format, not just on the creator itself.

Pyrowman responds:

Yeh, well that's the weird part, I'm not using any script, I just drop the sounds on a layer, but it's still not synced...meh...

[Dont Feel Bad]

Pretty Good

The lips themselves, even though they don't realy exist, need to come together on certain sylables, "B" in "Bad", "Better", and "Being", The top lip needs to touch the bottom teeth on the "F" in "Feel" and "Face", and in the phrase "...it's better than being..." needs to have more specific mouth shapes. Overall, not bad.

Lord-Of-The-Crayons responds:

Yeah I was a little stuck getting mouth shapes right for the start of words, thanks for the responce I know what I need to pratice now. ^.^

[Story of Angry German Kid]

Sucked

It would be better if you could come up with an idea instead of doing relatively nothing.

Maddrap responds:

is about the Angry German Kid it was on googlevideo and I watch it but did you watch on the sounds
on the movie did you or not well look again or just go on www.googlevideo.com
and you'll find the angry german kid

[DevilSlayer V-1]

Nice Video!

Can't wait for more! Good story, just hope there are a lot more demons to slay.

JazLyte responds:

Thanks, and yup, there'll be more

[Newgrounds Judgement]

Pretty good

Great parody of what happens here. Certain parts were boring, but overall, really funny.

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[PW Scrubs: Just In Time]

Good try

This was pretty good, I even chuckled a few times. It just isn't good enough for a collection. If there was more plot or relevance to the jokes, maybe. It's just not there.

Kalcaman responds:

i see what you are saying. Thanks for enjoying it though...but there is just a fine line between plot relevance and the jokes....too much plot relevance = too much to understand and not too funny and it works the other way with jokes. Thanks for your feedback